I felt the icy cold wind blowing through the school like a deck of cards getting blown around. It made me shiver from head to toe. I saw leaves falling from trees as the wind blew them in another direction. The smell of the tuck shop made me hungry as I walked onto the courts. Listening to the birds communicate with each other sounded like music. Standing in one spot made me wonder. Things keep coming to my mind like a race car racing on a race track. My heart was pounding like music co0ming out of a speaker. I was thinking about how to keep warm. It was just too cold but the sound of Miss Manuele’s voice saying, “all right now room 5 walk back to class quietly”.
I was relieved that we weren’t staying out there for another minute.
By Holeigh, Clendon Park
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i loved your story and i think it was cool to and also i liked they way you told us all the details keep it up holeigh but there was one mistake and that was on coming.
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shyniya
wow holeigh nice story i like how you put in some intresting story to tell peploe about what was happening and thinks they need to know about the story you did.
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that sounded cold!
ReplyDeleteThat is really good! You've got some interesting similies in there.Keep up the good work :D
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