Wednesday, September 16, 2009

Misery Island

One day many years ago, on an island in hell called misery island, five people were stuck in the Island. By the way these people’s names were John, Philip, Shanelle, Queyst and Shanya. Those five people lived in a very big cave called Mishima. Philip, the eldest was always mucking around in cave school. However John was always reading and keeping on time every time the teacher was asking him something. His name was Mr Quiversation. Shanelle got kicked out of school for swearing and for not keeping her hands to herself. And Queyst, was a very nice guy but was a Handicap. So you see the differences of the personalities of these five brothers and sisters. As years past the five brothers and sisters started to get older .As they got older they started to learn about magic. But as they started to get interested in magic a robot controlled ninja came hopping to Misery Island shaking. He hopped so fast that he hopped one more time and he landed in an excellent trap that the five brothers and sisters made in case of an emergency. “Youchhhhhh!” The ninja landed on a hedgehog and the spikes of the hedgehog sunk into the ninjas butt. Meanwhile, while the five students were learning magic they learnt a spell. Its special word was “quksilver dotius” this is a spell that could turn people into animals. Overall it was a “oh no!” Suddenly the five brothers and sisters heard a sound. “Hustle thump hustle thump hustle thump!”, “a three headed snake!” Philip shouted from the other side of the class. As he took one good glance at the three headed snake the three headed snake ate up Philip “oh no!” said Shanelle. And then when the others looked the three headed snake chomped up Shanelle, Shanya and John before they could know it. Now that left Queyst. But the problem was that he couldn’t do anything. He was cornered!!! He was surrounded by heads!!! Before he knew it he was going to be eaten!!! Suddenly, he took out his sword and cut one of the snakes head!!! Before the snake could munch him up he ran for his life and he escaped. So here Queyst was all by himself with a great story to tell to his kids. 409 years later… he has kids now his wife’s name is Stacey. His kids’ names are Abex, Richard Alex and Jibby. They are all boys. So Queyst isn’t all by himself he has a wife and kids “wait a minute where are my kids?”
Here we go again….

TO BE CONTINIUED….

By Sonatane Room 11

4 comments:

  1. Great writing Sonatane - I cant believe Queyst got to live to be over 409 years old!! He must be smelling pretty bad by now.

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  2. good job i liked story its interesting

    from sifu

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  3. that is a long story there.

    I wonder will be the next chapter be.

    by Daryl

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  4. I think your story was very cool and exsting I wish I was in your story.The other thing I liked about your story is that you tolled us wat the five peopel were like.

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